Development and Personal Critique

Because I changed my concept and direction again on Thursday with Jen and Meg, and subsequently undertook more research, I have not been able to meet my personal deadline for completing the design and structure of my float yet. I am one day late and still currently have a long way to go.

I am unsure about elements of this design at the moment. I am trying to infuse the street aesthetic with the traditional Ottoman architecture and what I have got currently I am not too pleased with. I think I might need to rethink the balustrade on the mezzanine level and I must start to put real thought into what sort of roof I will have.. How will this be held up? Get rid of that many windows too, this looks tacky.