Poster Presentation and Feedback

Feedback:

Firstly, I need to come up with a title for my project instead of having the title of the Spatial Studio. This is because if my work gets sent to OISTAT, they will not know what this means. I also need to think about my text a bit more, in which I need to get rid of the title 'design statement' as this is already clear. I need to look at the brief and adapt what I am going to write in order to be more concise (200 words). I need to write a short written description of my project, my performance to be housed and an explanation of my design concept.

Secondly, I need to either remove my drawing list or make this less of a feature. This is taking up too much revenue on my page currently that could be better used by my images. If I remove it completely I need to write what the drawing is next to each image. Add more annotations too. For example, my exploded balustrade, write what each layer will be like. 

Thirdly, decrease the size of the site plan, and text box. These are too dominant on the page and are distracting from my images. Focus in more on location plan and outline facilities such as toilets, food outlets etc. 

Change the colour of my building in regards to the other buildings in my site plan. Make it stand out. Also for my technical drawings, the way sketch-up exports the images, they look quite grey when printed. Therefore I will need to edit these to make them fully white.

Lastly, but most importantly, focus on the texture and material within my design. Describe this more through my drawings. Convey the atmosphere that is created. What is the texture and material on the walls. If it is wooden plywood walls, show draw this on my renders - develop slats? Make my 'hero' images larger.