Friday, 13 March 2015

Peer Feedback

Following my presentation, like my previous post in which I gave feedback for David and James, I have received feedback on my design. I must think about their comments and potentially adapt my designs accordingly:

The subway is an interesting idea and I the hype building walkway but as I feel as though the Turkish youth is quite a small minority in Berlin and perhaps you could aim it just at break-dancing youth in general? - David

The idea of placing a structure that is pre-made is interesting, but it makes me wonder what the appeal is to the youth culture if the stage is the same as to what they're already used to - James

Interesting development and quite a shift from your earlier work... how does this engage with the river and the brief to create a 'floating platform'? Need to refer back to the brief and ensure you are not straying too far from the intent of the project... Some really interesting potential here but need to discuss further - Jen

How does the idea of a subway translate to a floating structure? - Meg

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